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Science Fiction Haiku: SciFaiku

February 1st, 2010

I’m not big on poetry as a rule.  It’s a taste I think.  I like rock and roll, but not country.  I like colas, but not coffee.  And I prefer novels to short stories, and short stories to poetry.  I think I’ve always been more enamored of the idea of something than its presentation, although I do prefer a nice presentation.  Still, I think as a writer, developing skill with poetry is valuable and I have written poems.  I’ll read the poetry in science fiction magazines when I see it, and usually like it, although rarely love it (could be me, or the quality, not sure).

Haikus I’ve always liked pretty well.  They’re short, usually grasped in a moment’s reflection, and sometimes surprisingly profound or memorable.  From Wiki, a very short definition:

Haiku (俳句 haikai verse?) About this sound listen , plural haiku, is a form of Japanese poetry, consisting of 17 moras (or on), in three metrical phrases of 5, 7, and 5 moras respectively.[1]

I’m about science and science fiction, and it’s fun to insert these into old, traditional forms.  A lot of haikus are about nature, but why not technology?  Or other science fictional concepts?

There is a lot of science fiction poetry out there already, of course, and, as it turns out, a lot of haiku in particular.  There is in fact, a whole webpage and wike about SciFaiku.  I love it!  Check some out here and here, and a list of links here.

I thought I’d share a few efforts.

Never questioning,

Always working, the robot

Saves us time for what?

A big universe

too giant to comprehend

makes me feel little

My greatest nightmare

An evil robot monkey

Eating at my face

Teleport our team

To the blue planet below…

Wait! Wore my red shirt!

An ugly spaceship

Manufactured for vaccuum

Not for atmosphere

Quantum mechanics

Makes many worlds in my mind

And reality

A ray gun is fun –

until the alien pulls

out a bigger one

Have a favorite one to share yourself?  Write it in the comments or send a link.

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8 Responses to “Science Fiction Haiku: SciFaiku”

  1. David Ellis Says:
    February 1st, 2010 at 5:01 pm

    If only it was possible to make a living writing scifiaku.

    Or short stories, for that matter.

  2. Mike Brotherton Says:
    February 1st, 2010 at 5:10 pm

    And I just don’t think I’m subtle enough for poetry, where that seems the ideal to many fans.

  3. Valentin D. Ivanov Says:
    February 1st, 2010 at 8:14 pm

    Hi Mike,

    Hm, an interesting coincidence. Check out this:
    http://www.tor.com/index.php?option=com_content&view=blog&id=58679#comments

    Cheers!

  4. Craig Says:
    February 11th, 2010 at 7:15 am

    Beat count not enough.
    Seasonal reference too
    must haiku have. Spring!

  5. Mike Brotherton Says:
    February 11th, 2010 at 10:16 am

    Ah, but are there seasons in space?

    Maybe…

    Need to give that more thought!

  6. VonMalcolm Says:
    February 17th, 2010 at 7:45 pm

    Sci-Faiku

    Hard Science Fiction Frustration!

    No Gravity Floors?
    No Faster than Light Travel?
    Goddamn you Einstein!

    (Just Kidding!)

  7. Mark Cotterill Says:
    May 8th, 2010 at 5:12 pm

    A Soong-Type android
    Wanted to be human, but
    Died saving Picard

  8. Mike Brotherton Says:
    May 9th, 2010 at 8:51 pm

    Good one!

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